Post by Deleted on Dec 11, 2016 1:42:04 GMT
Alright, I'm late in this but I'm a bit confused so here we go.
Starting with CAWN - I do like the idea you have. I would like to know what the new WindClan peeps have to say about it. The same thing with RiverClan/ThunderClan. Because of that I'm going to let more stuff come to light.
Though I really do want to point out an issue that I'm not sure anyone's seen about the car crash. Having a car crash is not going to drive a immense amount of prey away. I live in a mostly forested area and not even fire can drive those buggers away for too long. I suggest maybe humans being in the area or something of the sort- but a monster-crash is probably not something that's logically feasible. While I like the idea of tense borders between them, I also feel like it's a bit too much at once. Thunder also has to deal with River. Dividing their resources only makes it feel like Thunder is at an extreme disadvantage. I don't see it being bad as a future plot though.
mark - I'm not sure one warrior will do much but it could certainly be a starting point. She could easily be one of the cats who is aggressive towards Wind and makes it a hassle to work together or resolve things peacefully. That's a good personal plot point and if we could get more into it- that could be a good clan point.
leona - I like the idea of using NPC's and I would like to second the statement in support of my original position of it. I like seeing the four clans fighting and that could certainly be a future plot point! I really think that would be cool!
mark - I like the idea about the sickness, but that doesn't really help the current plot point of Wind/Shadow being in contention.
mustang - I like that idea as well because the leaders should listen to their medicine cats. It could be another layer of the personal plots in the River/Thunder issue that can certainly be of great divide or unity in the clan.
--If I missed anyone or anything, I'm sorry. ;; Trying to do this before doing discussions for school.